It's not bad, but you really need to work on the grammar. It feels very awkward at times. Maybe ask someone to help?
I'm taking english classes now, all the texts gonna be rewriten, reviewed and fixed in the full-beta.
I enjoy this series, but the spiders to get the webs from are insanely hard.
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